The Prime Minister’s Secret Agent by Susan Elia MacNeal

The Prime Minister's Secret Agent (Maggie Hope Mystery #4)

Recommended with reservations

I haven’t read the previous books in this series and this book doesn’t work all that well as a stand-alone. I was kind of frustrated by it.

Maggie Hope, an American-British spy in World War 2, has retreated to a remote Scottish manor house to train other British spies. She struggles with depression caused by the tumultuous events of the previous book (referred to incessantly). When dead sheep are washed up on the shore and one of her best friends mysteriously falls ill, Maggie is drawn into a mystery that exposes the dark side of the British war effort.

It seems more like a coda to the previous book; too much time is spent resolving previous matters. Nonetheless, I enjoyed the historical setting and some of the characters. The author is good at conveying the sense of living in a time of desperation, when no one knew how things were going to turn out. I liked the set-up with Maggie teaching at the spy school in remote Scotland. She’s a compelling character and clearly a lot of research went into this.

But there are too many plot strands and they don’t cohere. Worst of all, the mystery gets short shrift in the midst of the lead up to Pearl Harbor, Maggie’s crazy German spy mother, Maggie’s depression, adopting a cat, Churchill fomenting, etc., etc. It was frustrating how little of the book is devoted to the actual mystery, not to mention the obviousness of the cause of death, if not who did it.

I think the author needs to pare down the number of plot elements and dig deeper into the mystery. This book would’ve been improved if it had just been about Maggie teaching at the school, dealing with her depression and coming out of it by solving the mystery. Instead we get a mish mash of a million other plots in a bunch of different locations unconnected to Maggie, just to tie it into Pearl Harbor and the US coming into the war, with the stupid Clara Hess character tacked on for…well, I have no idea why (see below).

Also she keeps introducing characters and then dropping them. There are repeatedly scenes where a new character is the main actor but we never see them again after that scene (for example, the scene where the double agent tries to give info to Hoover; the actor who’s training at the spy school). You think something more is going to happen with them and it doesn’t.

There was something about Maggie’s depression that wasn’t convincing. I don’t know why. It seemed kind of superficial, or maybe it just didn’t seem to fit the character, who seems very no-nonsense in the next book. Maybe the author needed to dig a little more deeply into Maggie’s feelings. Just using the shorthand “the Black Dog” didn’t seem adequate.

As in the book that comes after this one, the story revolving around Maggie’s mother, Clara Hess, is the worst part. Clara belongs in another book. She’s ridiculous and over-the-top. If you watched the recent FX show, Feud: Bette and Joan, I think Clara would fit in well in an early 60’s horror melodrama. As Jack Warner from that show might say, hagsploitation anyone? If I read any more of these, I think I’m going to visualize her as Bette Davis played by Susan Sarandon. I hate her character. She’s ridiculous. Get rid of her. Instead, the author implausibly has her escape every situation. Also there’s no connection to Maggie at all. Why is her mother even in these books?

Despite my reservations, you might enjoy this book if you like history, mysteries set in WW2 or Britain, stories about women in WW2, strong heroines.

I’m not going to jump to read another book in this series, although I wouldn’t mind reading the first one to see how this all gets started. Eventually. No time soon.


Mrs. Roosevelt’s Confidante by Susan Elia MacNeal

Mrs. Roosevelt’s Confidante (Maggie Hope, #5)Mrs. Roosevelt’s Confidante by Susan Elia MacNeal
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

Recommended for: lovers of historical mysteries, World War 2, lady detectives, Marvel’s Agent Carter

I really enjoyed this World War Two homefront mystery. It deftly combines a plethora of historical subjects and real historical figures with a clever plot and sympathetic fictional characters. As soon as I finished it, I looked up the other books in the series, wishing I could dive right in and skip over the other books in my queue.

At first, I was a nervous about the treatment of real life historical figures, but MacNeal won me over and I was soon able to lose myself in the story. The historical setting is well-done, and there’s a perfect balance between actual historical incidents and people and fictional ones.

At the height of World War Two, Maggie Hope is an American-born British spy working undercover as Winston Churchill’s secretary. In December 1941, right after Pearl Harbor, Churchill travels to Washington D.C. to meet with President Roosevelt, bringing along Maggie as part of his entourage. Without knowing that Maggie is a spy, Eleanor Roosevelt asks for her help investigating the disappearance of her secretary. Maggie also becomes embroiled in the campaign to save the life of a black Virginia sharecropper on death row. Eventually the two plot lines are braided together in a dramatic climax.

Maggie is an intriguing character: a trained spy who’s earnest and idealistic but who also has a dry sense of humor. I found myself wanting to know more about her. Raised in the United States by a professor aunt, her parents are a Nazi-sympathizing German and a British man. (The scenes involving her parents are the least effective. I assume they’re more meaningful to readers of the entire series. Without more background, their storyline was too melodramatic.) There’s an entertaining camaraderie between Maggie and her two male friends who also work for Churchill, and a frustrated romance or two adds some spice.

Throughout the novel, MacNeal skillfully weaves in social justice issues such as discrimination against African-Americans and women, and the legacy of British imperialism and American slavery.

”Yes, one of the District buildings [the Capitol] that survived the Brits in 1812.” Maggie pointed to the top of the high dome. “Freedom is one of my favorite statues.”

“A bit ironic as a topper for a building built by slaves, wouldn’t you say, Mags?”

She sighed. “You have a point.”

She also drops in a couple of gay and lesbian characters without making a big deal of it, acknowledging how difficult it was to be gay in this time period.

Overall, she very effectively recreates the atmosphere of World War Two Washington D.C., a time of great excitement and fear as the world waited to see whether the United States could turn the tide of the war. Music, food, decor, clothing, newspapers and magazines, restaurants and bars: the impressive amount of historical detail makes you feel like you’re really there:

On a bridge near the Lincoln Memorial, machine guns had been mounted, and soldiers patrolled. Outside the Jefferson Memorial, helmeted guards carried rifles with bayonets. Temporary wooden housing had sprung up on the Mall for the sudden influx of war workers.

As a mystery, my biggest complaint is that for some unknown reason, the villain is revealed early on. I personally prefer not to find out who the killer is until the end. It detracts from the suspense. Strangely, it’s also revealed almost in passing that the killer is a serial killer and it’s oddly downplayed. Make the villain less of a monster, unless you’re going to explore that character in more depth than this book does.

This isn’t one of those mysteries with a complex puzzle-like plot. Instead it entertains with compelling descriptions of World War Two Washington D.C. and sympathetic characters with a sense of humor and just enough emotional arc to satisfy. It’s also fun to see famous historical figures up close and personal.

I look forward to spending more time with Maggie Hope!

(I received a free copy of this book through Net Galley in exchange for an objective review.)

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